Mina and the Catnappers,Chapter no.1
Here is a chapter of a Mystery that I wrote,with pictures. If you like it,please comment and I'll share a second chapter of it and so on. If you really like the story,chances are that I might share another such Mystery with you. So here's the first chapter:
Mina
and the Cat-nappers
Chapter
1: Catnapped!
Hina woke up
with a start. She was sure she didn’t wake up just for nothing. She strained
her ears to hear anything. Perhaps she heard the creak of a door or something,
though she wasn’t sure. It could be the fan. Hina decided it was something. She
rarely woke up for nothing at all. She tiptoed outside. She saw some muddy
claw-steps in the hall. Mina, she thought instantly. Mina was Hina and her
sister Anum’s cat whom the girls loved dearly. Maybe she had made the noise
after all. Hina followed the claw steps all the way to the way to the door. She
must’ve jumped up and opened the door like she does, thought Hina. Hina was
afraid. I won’t go out alone, thought Hina. She tiptoed back to her room. She
woke up Anum, her elder sister and explained the situation. Anum agreed to go
outside to get the cat in. The girls tiptoed outside. We’ll lock the door so
Mina won’t go outside again. Hina whispered to Anum. Anum nodded in reply. She
opened the door And they went outside. Mina was nowhere to be seen. The girls
looked behind trees, under bushes and near plants. But Mina wasn’t there. The
girls looked at each other blankly, the answer etched on their faces: Mina was
kidnapped.
Interesting mystery! I love the descriptive words and suspense! You really should write more - it's awesome! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks! And by the way! Happy Eid ul Fitir! You're Muslim,aren't you?
DeleteYou're welcome! Eid Mubarak! Yeah. :) ☪
DeleteZainab, your story is really mysterious but interesting,
ReplyDeleteI'm waiting for the next episode.