Mina and the Catnappers,Chapter no.1

Here is a chapter of a Mystery that I wrote,with pictures. If you like it,please comment and I'll share a second chapter of it and so on. If you really like the story,chances are that I might share another such Mystery with you. So here's the first chapter: 


Mina and the Cat-nappers

Chapter 1: Catnapped!

Hina woke up with a start. She was sure she didn’t wake up just for nothing. She strained her ears to hear anything. Perhaps she heard the creak of a door or something, though she wasn’t sure. It could be the fan. Hina decided it was something. She rarely woke up for nothing at all. She tiptoed outside. She saw some muddy claw-steps in the hall. Mina, she thought instantly. Mina was Hina and her sister Anum’s cat whom the girls loved dearly. Maybe she had made the noise after all. Hina followed the claw steps all the way to the way to the door. She must’ve jumped up and opened the door like she does, thought Hina. Hina was afraid. I won’t go out alone, thought Hina. She tiptoed back to her room. She woke up Anum, her elder sister and explained the situation. Anum agreed to go outside to get the cat in. The girls tiptoed outside. We’ll lock the door so Mina won’t go outside again. Hina whispered to Anum. Anum nodded in reply. She opened the door And they went outside. Mina was nowhere to be seen. The girls looked behind trees, under bushes and near plants. But Mina wasn’t there. The girls looked at each other blankly, the answer etched on their faces: Mina was kidnapped.

Comments

  1. Interesting mystery! I love the descriptive words and suspense! You really should write more - it's awesome! :D

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    1. Thanks! And by the way! Happy Eid ul Fitir! You're Muslim,aren't you?

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    2. You're welcome! Eid Mubarak! Yeah. :) ☪

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  2. Zainab, your story is really mysterious but interesting,
    I'm waiting for the next episode.

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