Probably an Alien
Ali hungrily chewed on the old piece of
yesterday’s bread he was having for lunch. Sweat dripped on his forehead. “It’s hard work, working in the fields”, he
thought desperately as he wiped it with the back of his hand. Finishing the
rest of his lunch, he handed the plate
over to his mother who was washing the dishes at the tiny sink of their earthen
hut.
Trrring!!! The phone sounded, interrupting
Ali from his thoughts.
“Son”, his mother turned to him. “Can
you please get it? I’m busy.” Ali nodded and picked up the receiver of the
ancient telephone which sat on a ‘stand’ made of old bricks after checking the
number which looked like his friend Bilal’s.
“Hi pal, how’s
it goin’?” said the voice at the other end.
“How’s what going??”asked a puzzled Ali.
“Come
on! You know what I’m talking about!” He heard someone say.
“No, I don’t,” said Ali.
“Oh forget it. It’s useless talking to
you anyway.” Said somebody at the other end. “Oh! And you said your dad was
going to get you an ‘Apple ‘’??”
“An Apple???” asked Ali. “Oh yeah , he
did.”
“So how is it? Did you like it?” said somebody.
“Oh, It was big and red. I liked it.” Replied
Ali, merely confused. “But what’s so big
about that?”
“Big? You mean he got you a big Apple
tablet?” Ali heard somebody say.
“What apple tablet?” Asked Ali, still confused. “An apple flavored tablet?
The tablet he bought for me when I had the fever? What are you talking about???”
“A tab, ya stupid!” Said a scornful voice. “Don’t act so dumb.”
“Dumb??” Asked Ali. “ I can’t be
dumb when I can speak!”
“Forget it, Dumb head. It’s no use
talking to you, anyways.”he heard a voice say. “You’re always a waste of time.
Bye stupid!!”
Ali heard the call disconnect.
Thoughtfully, he put down his own receiver too and pressed the ‘redial’ button.
“That’s strange!” He said to himself. “ I must have mistaken it for Bilal’s
phone number! It wasn’t his!”
“Ali!” He heard his mother say. Ali flipped around.
“Yes?”
“Who was he on the phone whom you were
talking with?”
“ I don’t know. It was some strange
thing” he said as he wore a worn out pair of slippers. “Probably an alien”.
This story extract is excellent, Zainab!! I love the mystery and suspense in it! I wonder what's going to happen next... can't wait for you to release the next one (if you want to)! Keep up the amazing work! :D Btw, I love the name, Ali! I used it in my story too, lol! XD
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For commenting on your project,Your welcome! Featured projects deserve comments! :D
And by the way, this is not an extract, it's a full story! I think it's somewhat incomplete, but it's a story itself!
You're welcome! I enjoy commenting on your posts.
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Oh! I see, sorry! It's really cool, though. Btw, were you going to add another part of Catnapped, just wondering (if it's not a complete story)? I really enjoyed reading that one too! :D
This is such a meaningful and well crafted story. Apple is different for kids living in different parts of the same world. What an idea and what an imagination! Great piece of writing. Please keep on writing fiction, we badly need it. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I think a story is more effective than an informative and factual piece of writing.
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