An Unsuccessful Shopping Trip
Before I begin let me tell you that this was an O level's topic, and all the characteristics of me, my mom and my house are completely and totally fictitious.
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It was a pleasant Sunday Morning, and as usual, I woke up
late. Brushing hair out of my eyes, I went downstairs for breakfast to find my
mother all dressed up, swinging a huge purse in her arms. Eyeing me, she smiled
broadly, greeting me good morning. Then she pointed towards the egg and toast
on the table, and said, “Hurry up, beta, we have to go to the market today.”
I groaned. It was a beautiful morning, and I wanted to spend
it lounging about at home. Nonetheless, I obeyed. I picked aimlessly at the
breakfast and slurped up most of the milk. Then I went upstairs to change.
Pretty soon, I was ready for the shopping trip. I stepped
down the stairs to find my mother waiting for me. She rattled the bunch of keys
in her hand impatiently, and I accompanied her to the car.
Once in the car, I asked my mother what she had to do.
“There’s a one day sale at Khaadi” she smiled eagerly,
naming her favorite fabric store. “And I want to check out the winter wear.”
“Right” I moaned.
Upon reaching the shopping mall, my mother headed for the
car park. The parking area was packed with all sorts of cars indicating the
typical ‘Sunday’ rush that would be awaiting us inside the mall. Finally, we
found a suitable place to park the car, and stepped inside the mall. The place
was abuzz with noise and activity. Ladies of all shapes and sizes were roaming
about, most merely window shopping. Children, too, were pressing their noses at
the sweet shop glass or admiring sunglasses and shoes.
Since Khaadi was on the second floor, my mother dragged me
to the escalator, and we stepped on.
Upon reaching the upper floor, I swiveled my eyes around,
searching for the store. It was hard to miss. An orange-yellow board stood out
amongst the others.
Very soon, we were inside the store. My mother went straight
to the ladies’ textiles section, and began browsing eagerly for the dark winter
prints she so loved.
I looked about plaintively for any interesting dresses. The
shaggy khaddar kurtis hung on iron rods in the girls’ section were bright
shades of magenta, green, and black, too dark for my taste. I ignored
them. For awhile I stood admiring the
duly colored dupattas, featuring
little cute prints, but I soon got bored.
I went to my mother instead, who seemed to have settled on
dresses she wanted to purchase. Heading towards the cash counter, my mother
approached the salesgirl questioningly, “What will be the discounted price?”
she asked.
“Discounted price?” the girl asked, apparently confused.
“I’m afraid you must be mistaken ma’am, for there’s no discount!”
My mother stared at her, agape. “You mean-there’s no sale?”
she whispered hoarsely.
“I’m afraid, yes,” the salesgirl replied.
“Who told you about the sale?” I asked my mom.
“Anum, my friend,” she replied, aghast.
We left without the clothes. Khaadi as it is, a branded
store, the prices were much too high.
As it turned out later, my mother’s cheeky friend had tried
to play a harmless prank on my
mother.
This is SO good!! 8D I love how you've given an inside view of a daily life in Pakistan! And the story itself is really intriguing too, the way you made a plot twist towards the disappointment of there being no sale. :D
ReplyDeleteThe descriptions are really interesting too! This must be my favourite short story from you! ^^
Thanks a lot Kenza!Your comments are just great, you know, they really make my day!
DeleteYeah, well, Pakistani women(and most girls) are really crazy about shopping and clothes!
You're most welcome! (I love your comments on my posts so much too!) Your posts are so awesome!
DeleteHaha that's interesting! XD I know of people in Morocco who adore shopping for clothes too. XD
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DeleteGood story zainab!I liked the way you give details of each scene in this story.
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DeleteThankyou very much for this Zainab you had a great intelligency about writing. I am very thankfull to you have a nice day
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ReplyDeleteThis is SO good!! 8D I love how you've given an inside view of a daily life in Pakistan! And the story itself is really intriguing too, the way you made a plot twist towards the disappointment of there being no sale. :D
ReplyDeleteThe descriptions are really interesting too! This must be my favourite short story from you! ^^
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