14th August Special: Homeland
This is a story which I have been working on for months. Although this was meant to be a Novella ( a short novel) it turns out to be what they call 'a short story'. This is 1,196 words long, making it barely a short story. Because the topic is a patriotic one, I decided to post it today on 14th August. I hope this will make people realize how valuable Pakistan is.
Pakistan Zindabad!
Mr. and Mrs. Khan lived in Karachi but they were always
saying how good America was.
“Just like a dream”, Mr. Khan often said and his wife
agreed. America was very much more luxurious, safer, and better in every way
than her own country. She longed to live there. After all, who would want to
live in Pakistan? A poor third world
country with dirty streets,
load shedding, an unjust government and unfair laws. And no hope of things
getting better, either.
Mrs. Khan knew America was the best option-and she dreamed
of going there all the time.
* * *
The alarm sounded, waking them up. Mr. Khan woke up and
disappeared into the bathroom while his wife went to the Kitchen to make
breakfast.
Mr. Khan emerged from the bathroom and dried his hands with
a towel. Then he picked up his phone to check his emails.
Mrs. Khan hummed to herself while making Pancakes. She made the tea and poured it into teacups.
Then she put everything on a tray and took it to her bedroom. She took a
pancake and poured on some syrup. Mr.
Khan picked up his cup of tea without taking his eyes off the mobile screen.
“Listen,” he put down his phone and told his wife a while
later. “I just got an email from my travel agent. I had applied for an American
visa some time ago, and” –he paused to take a sip of tea- “he says he got it!”
Isn’t that great?
“It is,” said Mrs. Khan, dazed.
* * *
They shopped for new clothes and shoes. Mr. Khan arranged for plane tickets and
booked a hotel. The Khans were really
excited.
They were in America within a week. There stay was in
Florida, but they visited a few other states too. Mr. and Mrs. Khan loved America. It was just
the sort of place they wanted to live in!
And there weren’t any problems there either.
It was just Perfect.
* * *
Their two-week stay
flipped by. Very soon they were back at the Karachi Airport. They found a cab
and went home.
They paid the taxi driver and he helped unload the cab. Just
as they stepped in and switched on the lights, they flicked on and off and then
it blacked out completely.
“Oh NO,” groaned Mr. Khan.
“Damn that load shedding!” shrieked Mrs. Khan.
“I’m tired of all this!” exclaimed Mr. Khan.
“Let’s book a hotel room,”
suggested Mrs. Khan. “I don’t think we can live here!
But the lights came back within
half an hour, before they could book a hotel room and soon they were relaxing
on comfy armchairs, sipping warm cocoa.
“America’s Perfect,” Mr. Khan kept saying. “It doesn’t have all of these
problems,” even though there wasn’t any
Problem at all.
* * *
One day, when Mr. Khan returned
from work, he found his wife in a bad mood.
“I’m tired of all of this”, she
grumbled. “I think we need a change.”
“A change?” Mr. Khan raised a brow.
“Yeah, you know- maybe we could
move to America” she said excitedly.
“Oh.” Mr. Khan fell into an
armchair and began taking off his shoes and socks.
“Maybe we can,” he said suddenly.
“It’s possible”
“Do you really mean it?” Mrs.
Khan jumped up.
“Yeah- you know, my company has
branches in America. He replied. “so maybe they can transfer me.
“WOW!” said Mrs. Khan excited.
“OK, OK. I’ll ask my boss about
it and whether it’s possible or not. And if he says that is, I’ll look for an
apartment somewhere around San Francisco.”
He paused for breath. “But for
now, please set the table for dinner. I’m starving.”
* * *
The boss said yes, that was
possible and that he could be transferred to America easily. He added that the
company needed more staff for the American branches as they were short of staff
over there.
Mr. Khan broke the news to his
wife who told all her lady friends. She was delighted that her childhood wish
was finally coming true.
Mr. Khan applied for an
apartment. It was near impossible, he discovered. Most of the offices he contacted said they
didn’t have any empty rooms. The Khans were very worried. Finally, they found a
suitable two-room-apartment. He paid a hefty price for it and got it for rent.
Now all that was left was to go to America.
* * *
The Khans left for America within
a months’ time. They put their house on rent and arranged for their car to be
shipped to America.
They lived in a hotel for the
first few days while they got their apartment furnished. They moved into it soon.
Even though it took a long time
to get used to living in their tiny apartment after living in a mansion, the
Khans were determined to enjoy living in America. Little did they know that
America had it’s own problems too.
* * *
One day, Mr. Khan returned from
work to find his wife sad and quiet.
“What’s wrong?” Mr. Khan
inquired. “Aren’t you enjoying here?”
“Well”-she sighed. America is
good, but there’s nothing like Karachi. I miss everything, and now I realize
the value of our homeland.”
Mr. Khan was quiet for a moment. “You’re
right.” He said quietly. “There’s no peace of heart here.”
“I don’t even have any friends or
relatives here! It gets really lonely!” Mrs. Khan complained. “And who says it
is safe here? This isn’t any better like we thought. Pakistan is much better. After
all, Pakistan is our homeland!
“Yeah.” Mr. Khan said slowly. “I’ll
try to do something about it.
* * *
Mr. Bilal was in his office,
working on his computer when his secretary came in.
“Mr. Khan just phoned to say he
wants to return to Karachi.” He informed his boss.
“Mr. Khan?” Mr. Bilal raised both
his eyebrows. “Back here?”
“Er-yes, he asks whether he can
be transferred back here or not.”
“Hmm… I’ll call him and ask what’s
wrong.”
He picked up the telephone receiver
and dialed Mr. Khan.
“Hello, Mr. Khan?” he spoke onto
the phone.
“Yeah, Ali said you called to say
you want to return back to Karachi?”
“But that costs a lot, you know”
he said, irritated. “We can’t keep transferring
people here to there!”
He raised an eyebrow.” You’ll pay
for it?”
“OK,” he spoke into the phone. “I’ll
arrange for you to be transferred. As soon as possible.”
* * *
Two weeks later, Mr. and Mrs.
Khan were aboard a plane and going back to Karachi. Everything had been arranged. Mr. Khan’s
company had finally agreed, and as nobody was living in their house yet, they
could easily go to live there. Although Mr. and Mrs. Khan had been very excited
to go to America, they weren’t sad at all about leaving it. They were determined that it had been a good
decision.
Finally, the plane landed and
their journey ended. Mr. and Mrs. Khan were delighted to be back to Karachi.
Very soon they reached home and were relaxing on comfortable chairs.
“You don’t miss America, do you?”
Mr. Khan asked his wife.
“Not at all”, she replied
happily. “I’m just glad to be back to my homeland.”
* * *
That was a really nice story! That is true. There is nothing like Pakistan.
ReplyDeleteAmazing story! I had been longing to read it for AGES when you were writing it. :D I love it's message, and I totally agree with it.
ReplyDeleteI wish the people who moved abroad because they were sick of Pakistan would realize what Mr. and Mrs. Khan did and come back....
I read this story before coming on, and I think it's fantastic!! :D I love how you've introduced your characters and their desire. The moral really stands out too! I totally agree with you - the country we're born in always turns out to be the place we want to live in the most, because it's our homeland and the place we belong. I'd love to live in Morocco, for example, but I don't think I'd live there very long either... because it's not the place where I grew up. :P Keep up the good work! 8D
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteYou're really welcome! :D Btw, I love your new format! <3
DeleteTrue, homeland is homeland even if it does not offer luxuries. And peace of heart is as important as the peace of mind.
ReplyDeleteThank you Zainab for sharing this story.
A touchy story!
ReplyDeleteYour story gives a valuable message to those who are always pointing out the problems of this country, without realizing the qualities of this country and its people.
You've beautifully expressed the feelings of different characters, which is the most interesting aspect of your story.